Abased soul , blighted mind,

Smile is bilking,

Look  into the eyes,

Immense pain residing inside,

Like a covert,

Trying to hide,

Thoughts shouting for help,

Being unaware of their taciturnity,

Crying out of pity,

Sitting on the pains of life,

fake happiness deceived the body,

mind became unsteady,

the truth was so blatant,

 misperception was persistent,

after being thrashed,

the soul realized,

body was just dragging it,

into the illusion of mortality,

although, the real happiness lies ,

 in comprehending  its own eternity..


0 thoughts on “Eternity…”

  1. Charvi Tandon says:

    Ah! The similarity of views and perceptions !!
    It’s as deep as it could be , it works with surface and depth both !
    Beautifully written !!
    Charvi ..

    1. shreyans says: in?
      Really glad you connected..thank you for reading..

      1. Charvi Tandon says:

        Similarity with my thought process and ideas

      2. shreyans says:

        That is so great…very rare thing..nice blog of yours btw..

  2. Akhila says:

    Sometimes our body miss to be in sync with our mind and then misread every symptoms around us..

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you so much

  3. Mabel Kwong says:

    Bit of a sad poem, but one that ends on a hopeful note. Sometimes we just don’t want to admit that we are in pain or there’s something bothering us. Sometimes that’s because it is our own ego. But when we learn to see past our own ego, it’s then we come to realise happiness lies within the choices that we make for not only ourselves, but for others too.

    1. shreyans says:

      your analysis is wonderful..

      1. Mabel Kwong says:

        Your poetry is wonderful. It always seems effortless.

  4. Copper Cranes says:

    Anything of an earthly nature seem completely unimportant when contemplating eternity. Wonderful poem, touching on many of the devices that our minds put us through. Please enjoy your week Shreyans. ~ Mia

    1. shreyans says:

      such wise words..thank you mia…..

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