it flew against the air tenaciously ,

to mingle with one of its own,

it lamented on its way,

thinking ,where the others have gone,

it remembered that moment,

and those emotions,

when the body was obliterated,

and everybody went,

it was after all,

just a particle of ash,

searching for the eloped soul,

which was now without a face,

but the soul was in zeal,

dancing in ecstasy,

there was no sadness,

only  happiness in real…

0 thoughts on “Ashes…”

  1. radhikasreflection says:

    I loved the your perspective on the feelings of the ash and soul…..I never thought about it like this. 👍

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you so much radhika..really glad to share this..

  2. Letters That Matter says:

    Nicely Written!!!
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    Hope You will like it. 🙂

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you..will read your blog soon..

  3. Akhila says:

    Ashes searching for lost soul.. It’s a wonderful combination shreyans

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you akhila..

  4. lamarrwenrich says:

    Love this – beautifully written & great imagery

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you for the kind words..really glad..

  5. Poorvi says:

    Great poem!

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you so much..)

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