Empty bowl..


There is a bowl, with convoluted design,

Its beauty is shining, and detailing is fine,

It looked at me in the eye,

I responded with a sigh,

I was breathing, yet dead,

with face smiling and heart sad,

It called me and i ignored,

It was ebullient, i was bored,

I was proud that i was alive,

I had something to thrive,

It warned me audaciously,

don’t live so proudly,

same are we, nothing to pity,

 as from inside, we both are empty..


0 thoughts on “Empty bowl..”

  1. Mabel Kwong says:

    I love how you have so much thought about something so simple… We are both empty. What a profound thought. I suppose we don’t know everything in the world, and like bowls, we should aim to share 🙂

    1. shreyans says:

      Thanks for the motivation..and i think so too..please keep writing..

  2. Sweta Ojha says:

    That’s a great write-up. I really like the thoughtful comparison.

    1. shreyans says:

      That makes me really happy..thank you so much..

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