amidst the silent crowd,
to the sky i bowed,
wondered in the next moment,
neurons in my head became fervent,
who was up there,
to the ground, i was not fair,
it was the height of hypocrisy,
with the sky, i got so busy,
forgotten the ground, which raised me,
i was flimsy, but it praised me,
realized it suddenly,
asked for forgiveness, keenly,
thrashed myself on to the ground,
got immersed in the dirt, the body was unbound,
i looked at the sky and said as it flew,
with feet on the ground, i will reach up to you…
Asha Seth says:
Awesome realisation and resolution, I must say.
shreyans says:
Thank you so much…really glad you connected..
Asha Seth says:
Totally.
writeshefali says:
Lovely … castles in the air when the base is not rooted properly… so make those roots deeply entangled in the ground, so when u reach the top u dont ever fall down…. thats how i took it…
Loved this one 😊👍🏼
shreyans says:
You took it perfectly..exactly my point..thank you for liking it..
writeshefali says:
My pleasure 😇
kiranmag says:
Wonderful and Devine too
shreyans says:
Thank you so much…glad you think so..
cp_chithra_cp says:
You have got nice rhyming too..😄
shreyans says:
Thank you so much..
cp_chithra_cp says:
Welcome!😃
Dilkash Shayari says:
Lovely.
shreyans says:
thank you so much..
Dilkash Shayari says:
Welcome ji.