Immersed in darkness..

the weather was warm around,

The  air was ringing a pleasant sound,

Perceived the brightness, only through touch,

Was cloistered in darkness, no light as such,

The comeliness was shining everywhere,

I was  in dark, no one there,

Earlier I talked with asperity,

Inside my mind, there was no lucidity,

What it was to see,

To look ahead and run free,

Wondered it in every moment,

The inscrutability of it was dormant,

They loved the light,

I got accustomed to no sight,

for long my heart cried,

before I finally realized,

To look into the veracity, you don’t need eyes,

If you immerse in the perpetuity, above the senses you rise..

0 thoughts on “Immersed in darkness..”

  1. Sonali@foodtravelandmakeup says:

    great post…

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you so much for reading..glad you liked..

  2. elaine says:

    ” To look into the veracity, you don’t need eyes,”— meaningful 🙂

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank you so much…glad you liked it..

      1. elaine says:

        🙂

    1. shreyans says:

      Thank u so much..

  3. Vinny Idol says:

    You have a way with words. I had to google a few of them.lol I read this poem, and I feel like it describes someone diving head-first into love. The key to me is, this person is doing while being betrayed by his “crush”.
    Or I could be wrong.lol

    1. shreyans says:

      Hey…thank you for reading…actually the poem is about a blind person, who has made peace with his condition, he has risen above his senses, to realize that real beauty lies there..

      1. Vinny Idol says:

        Oh wow. I was way off. lol. That description is better than what I wrote.
        Good job nonetheless.

        1. shreyans says:

          No prob..everything can be interpreted in many ways, depend on the one reading and his state of mind..thank you for reading..

          1. Vinny Idol says:

            Thats very true. Thanks for replying.

          2. shreyans says:

            Welcome

  4. writeshefali says:

    If you become a hermit n just look inside u really don’t need anything to understand of the outside 😊….who knew darkness had its own light… Lovely lines Shreyan , really loved this one 😊👍🏼👌

    1. shreyans says:

      It gives me great pleasure, thank you for making time and reading.shreyans

  5. Mabel Kwong says:

    Great poetry. When I read it, I felt a sense that light will triumph over darkness. Even when we can’t see the light, we can feel it. Can certainly feel that is how people who have visibility issues feel, but I also like Vinny’s broader interpretation of it. Sometimes some things can only be felt with the heart, and that is when we will feel whole.

    1. shreyans says:

      Yes…its written for blind, but in general it tells us all to look beyond our senses, and feel the perpetuity..thank you..glad you liked it..

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